OH, how very exciting. I just love to see people create their own world and run with it. I'll be sure to check back in to see how the story is progressing. I'm stoked to see what stories your mind will unveil. I think it's a very good start. Thanks for sharing it with us. I haven't had the time to sit down and make any real progress with my story. :( babies sure do take heaps of one's time.