...But Would You Be A Blessing, My Blessing? - inspired by @fisteganos
Waiting for a blessing
Every day I work hard,
Every day I work smart,
Every day I recreate myself,
Every day I push myself,
That I may not not get a curse but a cause.
I forget momentary fantasies,
I forget the rewards of today,
I let go myself in happiness I find,
I let go all burden of myself,
that I may be a blessing to the world.
In grasp for a better tomorrow I held onto,
In grasp of the yesteryears I understand,
In the thoughts of my reflecting, I am nothing,
In thoughts of my weakness, I am made strong,
that my weakness and strength makes place for a blessing.
And my bones; they feeble,
My blood stood still like a pap,
And my thoughts became blank,
My shock ran through me, showing me to hell's way,
For my blessing has left me.
So I went for a quest,
So I started a journey,
That I may find all within me,
That I find all the man I lost,
but no one journeyed with me.
I became a shadow of myself,
I became a mirror for a curse without a cause,
I became shattered in spirit,
I became broken into the sands,
with no hope of a blessing.
So would you be the water to awaken fresh breath of me?
Would you give me a cause and not a curse?
Can you restore my frozen blood with a sweet laughter; so pure to awaken dead hearts?
Can you be all the strength I need; in my weaknesses, my failings, and in my trials?
Can you give me hope beyond the unseen?
So I began my struggles anew,
I took the journey from the outside to the inside,
So I saw not a cause, and a blessing,
I saw you and myself,
I saw the blessings in you and I,
I saw a new world, a blessing,
....but would you be a blessing, my blessing?
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This poem is inspired by @fisteganos
All Rights Reserved ©I.C Nelson 2018
Yours truly loved
Wow this is a nice poem about blessings @iconnelly =)
Thanks @micch for coming around hope to see you next time.
You are very much welcome friend @iconnelly :)
The above really got me, this highlights the different challenges a young man faces in the course of finding his path. Aptly written, well done @iconelly
Yes oo, there is really a struggle for us young men not to give up. We must always reinvent ourselves.
We find motivation in many different things. Whatever path we choose, the fact is that we can’t give up on trying.
This is nice 👍
No, we must keep trying. Thanks for coming around!
Wow, this is a beautiful piece.
This part, is so true with me, and i know my success is sure. Thank you.
Motivating, thanks for this reflective words this morning
Thank you for sticking around
Loving
Wow, this is a beautiful piece.
This part, is so true with me, and i know my success is sure. Thank you.
yeah! count your blessing every day one by one!
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Nice poem! Carry on!