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RE: Prologue from my book - 'Mama, Mama Are You There?' Thoughts/Guidance welcome.
I've just read this carefully. imho, it's excellently written. I really would not change a word. I was immediately engaged and my attention did not stray right till the end (as you know, we are all having our attention spans manipulated). The story sounds riveting and I can't wait to get the next chapter. I totally mean that. Please do not stop writing - your spirit guide is right. Most seriously.
Bless you 'H'.
Your kind encouragement and enthusiasm means the world to me.
Be happy.
xox