Trapped thoughts roam freely...
Sage be dammed burn the town but not today it's time to play stifled voice there was a choice some choose to lose fickle muse
Trapped thoughts roam freely...
Sage be dammed burn the town but not today it's time to play stifled voice there was a choice some choose to lose fickle muse
This has perplexed me now for 3 days which is odd since I feel I understand the intention but can't explain my meaning ... haha think I just confuse myself at times. I really do like this line thank you.
Let's just blame this one on the sage. He probably had the hidden meaning all along.
Bit of a douche that guy. :)
I absolutely love the writing style. May have to give it a go myself one day.
mmm if it helps this started with the first line or two repeated as a rap. Not being dedicated to actually trying to write a proper lyric, I did stick to the feel I wanted hence my ten million commas, also considering that I may have a poem and someone told me commas speed things up and periods will make it slow.
You keep the train of thought and loop the beat run it to the end when changing the scene is as simple as dropping the base.
Slow it down when you feel drained a picture has been framed focus on the time from now and envision the end, scratch a bit as you add some details then play it out as you walk away. Pretty fucking chuffed with yourself.
But in honesty read some of @hyperboles freewrites it will get you in that freeflow space, which is just my personal opinion your flow might be different. Their posts are still amazing so regardless worth a read.
Hey thanks! Will definitely check it out. I do the 5min freewrites sometimes. So this could be something to add to the repertoire. I kind of enjoy the rhyming freeflow feel you created.
I have a couple of comment buddies to practice with so this could be fun.
yay. we'll wait with bated breath.
👋Well you will probably see anything I type since you seem to show up everywhere these days.
well headchange I think that in my mind at least, I don't see you very often so when I do I say something so that just makes it look like I'm where you are but I know I'm not because you are with another or other groups than me, I'm not with other groups.
LOL I was just picking on you. Actually it does seem like forever since we had a real chat. This week has been kind of crazy. Maybe next week will be a bit more laid back. btw how did that secret club application go? I was meaning to ask about that. Did you get in?