Muse (Original Story)

in #writing7 years ago (edited)

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The writer looked at the empty page in despair.

Frustrated, feeling his soul so full, but his mind unable to dump it into the paper, he was slowly dying. The inspiration wasn't coming. His spirit longed for art. He almost could feel it with the tips of his fingers, but always slipping away from him.

Hollow words forming incomplete sentences. Like a puzzle, missing all the important pieces. His work had a perfect technique, but it lacked life.

Then, on his darkest night, the writer cried out amid the vapors of alcohol and storm. He cried out to the sky his desire for sacrifice. He offered everything he had in exchange for what he was looking for.

The art.

Then, the muse appeared.

She flew in from the shadows. She was beautiful like no other. Her skin was white as paper and her eyes black as ink. Her hair was a dancing poem and her movements told a story with every gesture. Her lips were red as blood, shed for love.

She found the writer's body, fascinated by her. She laid on his icy skin, while hers was warm and wistful. The man felt her closeness and her slow breathing. Her girlish smile and her womanly body. The innocence of the first writing, done with a trembling hand, and the glory of the masters' most exalted novels.

She looked at him with promising eyes. She stroked the messy hair of the anguished man who summoned her and kissed his dry lips.

He put his hands around her and created verses of passion and fury. That night, every second lasted for centuries. Mysticism and reality, skin and fantasy. The most beautiful dream anyone has ever had.

At dawn, she looked at him again.

With mockery. With rage. With spite and disappointment.

And she left.

The writer cried for her with a shattered heart, carried to heaven and then dropped into hell. His burning soul had painful sores. The greatest love killed by the deepest sadness.

And the writer took ink and paper and started to write. He wrote non-stop for days and days. Stories and poems, verses and songs, praises and sonnets. The dam of his soul, broken by a kiss. His desperate hand captured with tears and blood the most beautiful words that any mortal had the honor of reading, united in majestic ways.

For days and days, he wrote. Until his body got undone, and his heart got exhausted. Until his soul vanished into nothing.

But he would live forever in his work, like all the masters. Like every man who has immortalized himself on paper, for present and future generations to amaze. His feelings taken to the limit of glory and abandonment.

Immortals are rarely happy.

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This post is MUSE-ic to my ears! @ironshield

Ha ha! Thank you! :)

I enjoyed the visuals and personification. Poetic fiction!

Poetic fiction. That sounds all kinds of cool.

Thank you!

Very impressive story..thank you very much for sharing

Thank you very much for your kind words!

My pleasure and you are always welcome

Amazing story my friend. There is no better motivation and muse than a woman. Sadly she left in this case, but the writer got what he wished for. He got his MUSE and started writing. There are so many stories, poems, writen about a woman out there. I only wish she returns to him one day again. But, next time to stay. :)

Amazing post my friend. Enjoyed reading it. :)

The muse could only visit once in a lifetime. Some times it is enough for a masterwork. :)

Thank you for your kind comment!

Very true my friend. But, I always want to see the happy ending :P I hope she comes back again. lol

@flashfiction, good job. I enjoyed being able to get a better glimpse of who you are in this post.

Keep up the good work!

So glad you liked it, thank you!

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I loved this and I think the translation was incredible but I can see why it would be difficult to move such a piece from one language to another. Thank you for taking the time!

He put his hands around her and created verses of passion and fury. That night, every second lasted for centuries. Mysticism and reality, skin and fantasy. The most beautiful dream anyone has ever had.

Really beautiful imagery here especially. That feeling of the words just pouring forth in an ecstasy of creativity. I'm so glad I found this at The Isle of Write Discord server :)

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