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RE: DECENTRALIZED Fiction Writing – Add a Chapter to My Story :-)
CHAPTER 5
The smell had intesified.
Fabio is staring at his own reflection in the window.
Why did he break down so quickly ?
Every time they argued, this would happen;
Emma goes passive and calls him silly.
How silly he is - a self-made millionaire and world class broker.
-Paying for her lifestyle of parties and nice dresses.
He's hurt and lonely.
He turns to the girl again, they start speaking simultaniously.
'What is your name ?'
'Have you been to the Fijis ?'
Please, please, please:
Don't make Fabio grab his phone to call Emma.
If anything, make her call him, please !!
hahaha , no smartphones please, no text,no whatsapp . Better to let him go to the tropics for a failed one night stand attempt because I want Emma to show up before its too late because I love happy endings.She might change her mind and comes back.
Maybe you should write a chapter from Emmas perspective ? :P
I think she is acting silly ...
Interesting thought I had as well