As soon as I read this piece I noticed parts that seemed to connect almost like a poem within a poem:
An everyday tragedy
jackals who question spring's eminence
and disobey scruples of dead gods
taken to the torch
projected on our faces
When I see you pop up on Steemit, I like to take a look at what you're creating anew. Excellent work.
Very fascinating that that jumped out at you! I appreciate you telling me that. Thanks for all your support @evernoticethat!