Very creative and well described. Interesting to see from a deer's eyes. This made me think of the Bambi movie.
I did notice quite a few typos and errors. I hope you don't mind me saying. I know there was a discord channel where other Steemians would proof read your finished story, before you post it. I don't know if that channel is still active. I think @rhondak was one that worked with it. Writersblok or writersblock. Something like that.
I look forward to reading the rest of the story.
Peace
Thank you.
I noticed the errors after posting the story (most of the errors are from when I was first writing it in 3rd person and I changed it to 1st person) and I have not yet edited the mistakes in this post.
The next part is posted https://steemit.com/writing/@scarletskylor/a-buck-s-life-part-two, I tried harder to get the mistakes.
Thank you for reading it.
Cool, thank you!