MY CHOCOLATE CANDY BAR-KNOWING DRIZELLA

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Burn it ,,these words came over and over again in Susan's head,she started having hallucinations of Drizella, she was not sure of what was going on but she felt her brother was having same.The worst part is their parents never noticed these things,and this hurt Susan more than anything.

Their parents had separated for a while ,their mum got tired of their dad cause he was cheating on her and she couldn't take it ,so the kids visited their dad during the holidays and they were with their mum at the time and she was rarely at home.Susan was incharge of taking care of her brother and this made it very easy for Drizella to torture them both.

One day after school,Susan decided to find the origin of Drizella,she asked around and finally found the house Drizella was auctioned from,and there was the answer to her questions for she met an old woman there,remember Susan was about 13years old but this had made her grown into responsibilty and more matured.

She knocked at the front door twice and on the third attempt,she heard a voice from inside,an old woman opened the door and gave Susan a warm smile and with this ,she had no need to be afraid .She got into the house,it was neat and very comfortable,the woman offered her a seat and a cup of hot choco and introduced herself as Amy ,,and before Susan ccould speak,the woman already mentioned that she knows why Susan was there 'DRIZELLA' and also mentioned that drizella beloned to her niece.

Susan was excited on hearing that drizella belonged to someone else once but this excitement was cut short when the woman said the 'DRIZELLA IS HER NIECE', .The true story about drizella was just about to begin,the worst story Susan has ever heard.....

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This post has been upvoted and resteemed. i also started following you to see more of your work

This is a good start to a story that I am feeling is going towards a thriller/ horror story, but it is really really short. Is this a summary,or hook into what will become a novel? This has the capability of being something wildly entertaining.

thank you @beemillz ,its the continuation of the initial story ,its a story with different parts,thats how its going,i hope you liked it,you can check my blog and the other parts..
cheers

Just went through your blog. I love your contents and I followed you.

BTW, this particular story should have a continuation right? #anticipating

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