Week #15 Fox Tales: Gilda

… gilda looked through the opening of her browstone and the beautiful display of pastel blue sky before the bombs exploded one more time. she jumped with fright as she heard another round of people screaming for their lives. she knew she had to get out of the attic before someone found her, the soldiers were swarming the streets and killing people -- blood was everywhere. she held on tightly to her gun and extra ammunition she had hidden away realizing she was alone. gilda was visibly shaking, but knew she had to just breathe and focus just as her survivalist instructor had taught her, she could do this. the bug-out bag she had created was ready to go with only had a few more meals left, she had to make it out the door and on the route she practiced over and over before the takeover. she heard the shouts in the street and knew there were still too many people to make a go of it, she would have to wait a little longer. suddenly, gilda heard a crash downstairs and heard many footsteps rushing into the kitchen. there were men and women voices, and they started to play some music while they ate, drank, and had sex. it took everything for her not to jump out the window and run for her life, but she knew she had to remain calm. there was no way she would be able to move since the floors would creak. the unwelcome visitors would surely hear her. gilda started to meditate and get into the mindset of no space or time. when she brought herself out of the zone, she looked up through the exposed brick to see the twinkling of stars. she didn’t hear a sound and quickly grabbed her bag to head out of the newly exposed brick that led out to the neighbors rooftop ...

Hmm, I'm jumping into this in medias res, but it looks like you have a good flow going. Am I getting it right? She made bricks disappear with her brain power?
Also, clearly you've made a conscious choice against capital letters. Any particular reason for the choice!
Thanks for sharing.
Hi there, the contest is 15 sentences and to drop you in the middle of a story and leave you wondering. :)
Flow was the most important part.
Nope there was a “takeover, bombings.”
I’m not sure why, I felt the story should not be capitalized. A style I like and I’ve seen when reading a book.
Thank you for reading and commenting! :)
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Was she hiding out in a bordello? I love the twists in your stories and there is action too. Great read!
You would think so lol
She was in her attic, takeover, unwelcome visitors ... so someone had come into her house ...
OH! lol I read it as an attic ..in a random place, not her own lol. My mind wanders lol.
no worries ... !! LOL bordello was pretty good though ... we had 15 sentence limit and we had to dump you right in a part of the story .. :)