You definitely captured her unbridled energy, and I definitely got the sense of a child whose light shines bright!! I love the picture of her with the bow, what an excellent addition! Now I understand why I was relating to her so well in that chapter, similar things have been said about me in my youth (see, you're not the only one who can brag, haha!)
I've said it before and I'll say it again, the silver lining is such a great addition, I really love the glimpses into your life and the life of Ledd!
Just wanting to warn you, it's been a particularly slow night in steemit land. I commented on the-alien's post more than an hour after he posted and I was only the second comment, which is super unusual for him.
Love everything about this story, as always, can't wait for more my friend!
A slow night in Steemit land is a typical day for me :D hahaha! Thank you for saying that, it's nice to have some acknowledgement that the series is serving its purpose. Really though, I initially just wanted Silver Lining as a sort of conduit for my tendency to over-explain things. I never imagined that it would have this sort of potential. Such a happy coincidence!
I'm just sad that Ace won't feature that prominently in the story (oops Spoiler Alert). As much as I wanted her to, I don't want the focus taken away from Zepp, and I tried to stick true to what his typical day really looks like.
Thanks for your continued support, my friend! The comments you leave are very invaluable :D