I wish I had more time to read the prior chapters as well as I like this one. I like how you build drama around his sister and then she asks where they were all going :D I know it was not to laugh but it made me laugh anyway. I was expecting something bad to happen and then she comes with this.

I like how you describe your characters and her love to her brother. It makes the story very interesting to read :)

Thank you for sharing and have a nice day!