When It Rains... Contributed by @Olawalium

in writing •  5 months ago

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I love the sound of the rain
Not the best of rhythmic sound
But I love to hear it as it eases my pain
I always enjoy the effect on the floor with its pound
It makes me light up and get excited as a businessman with a lot of gains
When it rains I always love to be homebound

I love the freshness and the coolness it brings
When you draw near to me, I bet my heart sings
It gives me courage, and I don’t drink red bull but it gives me wings
Sometimes I imagine smiling and everyone sees my teeth in blings
When it rains, I stand outside and observe, like I have watched many kings
Except that you won’t find on my fingers many rings


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When I was younger I run outside when it rains
On getting back inside I know I will get some cane
The thrill that the rain brings make me forget the pain
Oh countless times have I been under it to train
You feel so cold sometimes you feel the freeze in your brain
When it rains I feel my energy restored and not drain

I have always enjoyed the coolness and the sound
When it rains I feel my body relaxed and think clear
I enjoy the feel of freshness my body enjoys
I really cannot bear the sweats trickling down in heat
I would never want it any other way than have it rain
Today, it rained all day and I felt the touch on my body


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Rain has its own downsides especially when it comes with storm
It makes you get worried and you feel your skin crawl like a worm
I always love when the clouds come together to form
You hear the loud sound and everyone takes cover
I love to stand and absorb the wonder
Even with the downsides, I​ love it when it rains.

Thank you for your time.


My pen doesn’t bleed, it speaks, with speed and ease.

Still me,

My tongue is like the pen of a ready writer.

Olawalium; (Love’s chemical content, in human form). Take a dose today: doctor’s order.


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Rain always can attract the heart. Seeing him down gurgling on earth always leaves an unspeakable meaning. Me and rain. The rain always calms the heart. Apparently when the rain came, when the angels came running down to earth. The dark sky of rain made the angels free to roam. The rain is too able to make me grateful for the beauty of nature. Thankful for the great power of God.

The descent of the clear water crystals on the streets, makes everyone go to save themselves. The rain has been able to wash away the dust on the streets, giving life a semblance of drought, sweeping away the sadness of the universe.

The Universe is always waiting for the rain. Waiting for a little bit of the meaning of life. Awakening daydreams. Running chase amid the chill of nature. Ah, the rain is always able to attract sense to reveal the meaning. I was too fascinated by him.

Nothing more exciting than watching the rain. See and feel her presence. And because of it, I became too often fell in love. On Mother's smile. On a great longing for Dad. On the sincerity of brother's affection. On the cuteness of twin sister. In children who sincerely pray. In the statue of istiqamah make everyone happy. In the sky that holds a lot of the meaning of life. In the dim month keeps me at night. On such a quiet night. On the leaves that fall in the swallows of the times. In those who wake up at the time of the fajri to face the Divine. At the change that helps life. On a faithful friend listens. And on the details of God's power.

The rain may not be able to defeat the beauty of the aurora. However, the rain has been able to overcome my loneliness. When running in the rain. At that time I was lulled to his charm. Warming charm. Cleans the mind. And that's when, I can smile broadly.

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Beautiful...very beautiful.

Rain gives peace to people's peace. The words of the rain that fascinate anyone. People who do not want to take bath in the rain can not be found. Farmers are most happy in the rain. Because their crops are better in the rain. Then their smiles were seen.Due to rainfall, their crop yield doubled. During rainy season, rivers, canal-bills, fresh life get back, fish and breeding in the fish are fast. Even the rain is very happy.

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You are right my friend, rain brings everything alive. I just enjoying seeing rain, regardless of the negative it brings sometimes. Thanks a lot my friend.

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Yes, when friends come to the finish of the rain, the real face of nature can be seen which is so impressive that it is not saying. Then we realize that there are so many forms of nature.thank you brother.

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You nailed it bro, everything will come back to life in the raining season...

Ever since I was a kid , I love to play in the rain cause a good sleep is what follows . Rain is a blessing to humanity I must confess. The farmers smiles when it rains , the coolness after the rain brings about a peaceful feeling. I love it when it rains all day cause it got me married to my Juana ...😀

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Hahahahahahahaha i grew up wishing i was married anytime it rains because i do feel when it rains, you must be cold, and for married people, you would want to keep warm. Hahaha. Now i know better. I want to absorb and soak up the sweet feelings that comes when it rain. I just love the sound and the sight.

Thanks a lot brother.

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Hahahahahah, I will pretend I don't see this... Lol

We will see whether the wish come true on that faithful day... Lol

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Yes we smile, I'm even smiling now because it just finished raining here... Lol

I think rain if for the farmers, with every comments I've gone through... Lol

Of course everyone should like it when it rains cos it's always cool, not hot as Sun do. Fruits and vegetables are always enough and cheap when it rains

I bet you can't like it when it rains like farmers, they pray it rains always cos that's when they gain most and plants

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Absolutely!. Farmers always pray that it rains. It is always good for crops and fruits. Everything comes alive with rain.

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I just revealed another part of you that you a a farmer, a practicing farmer for that matter... lol

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I bet you can't like it when it rains like farmers, they pray it rains always cos that's when they gain most and plants

Yes, we love it more than anyone else..lol

Though @olawalium is a framer too..... Ssmile

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Definitely you are a farmer too. What did you plant?

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Currently I'm not into planting, but I keep poultry, fish, pigs, rabbit, goats and sheep....

very nice lines
keep it up dear!

what a nice rendition and writing skills. I hope to read more of your blogs. thanks and God blessed.

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I hope to see more of you around too. Thanks for your kind words.

The rain can be so refreshing at times and so calm, so relaxing as to have a very serene day in your house. It is not all the time since there are occasions when it becomes "violent" and it ruins our day, when it matches with a very strong wind.

In most cases I like the rain, it eliminates the heat of the strong sun in the summer and many times it allows us to see a rainbow later, it is definitely very necessary.

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Yes! The rainbow!. What a beautiful sight to see. I love rain so much. It eliminates the heat as you have said. Thank you for this wonderful comment.

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I love it best when it rains and I'm @home.

It's very nice to read😊
It's like i feel i'm dancing in the rain😊

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Hahahahaha let's dance in the rain, shall we?

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Sure..lols😊

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Yaaaay!. Perfect.

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So perfect!

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Hahahahha, you must be a very good dancer then.. Lol

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Lols. Maybe😊

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Hmmm, I'm trying to imagine how you would be taking those steps... Lol

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Just left and right!

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Smile, keep taking them dear... Ensure you don't off the key... Smile

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Smile😊

The rain has a special luster inside us, with its fresh drops and its fragrant aroma. It makes us feel hopeful and tells us that goodness has come. We are eagerly waiting to spread on the face of the earth a kind of optimism.

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Absolutely. Good one my friend. Love this amazing comment. You put my feelings into words.

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Awesome point you mentioned here dear... Rain indeed refresh

nice text :-)

Hahahahah, perfect. As in, it is just too perfect.

The rhymes, the message and the mode of presenting it are just too perfect, thanks for this beautiful poem about rain @olawalium

I love rain too, especially as a farmer, because it makes all things to come back to life which mean more money for me... Lol.
The plants would come back to life, the animals will be refreshed, people are excited because fresh food would be coming out.. Lol

Thank you @olawalium and @communitycoin for this epic poem....

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Absolutely. You got it right there. Thanks for your kind words as usual. Always appreciated.

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A big thank you too... Smile

The rhythm of this poetry is so superb I couldn't even stop singing it with the powerful rhyme scheme adopted and the choice of words which is simple and convey the message well enough. (Abab) rhymes all through.

Wow, I could remember vividly when I used to go out in the play with just my pant to explore nature in its uniqueness and simplicity, I couldn't even care whether I'm going to catch cold later in the day due to exposing myself in the falling rain. I always anticipate when it will rain soon, up till now, I still have the feeling as I have toppled the past once again.

as I lay here ,
listening to the train
I remember your poem amongst
mid day ;

dreaming of the rain .

And you got me running through my chilhood days. I feel like playing hide-and-seek in the rain again.

Really love this piece. I'm following straightaway to read more. I guess I found a like-minded fellow.

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The rain has an extraordinary radiance inside us, with its crisp drops and its fragrant smell.

@communitycoin thank you, friend,... your blog is such an awesome

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