I believed @svashta is a little bit negative when he mention that 'sometimes the bad guys win...' I would say yes but for a short period... Bad guys never wins even when we can take winning or loosing as aspects of our opposing realities, just like ying and yang. I think I will get into the writing board collaboration here to add the power of the deathless, the power of the infinite universe into your tale.
A new, uncorrupt, Sherif in town? ;D Could work. But if it justice you want... Clarabelle has A LOT of explaining to do, and some prison time on her back :p
With my story I also gave Clarabelle the chance to get away with her crimes without doing jail time. Up to you to decide, though. If justice wins, Clarabelle doesn't. Nor does Bob.
Yeap...I did a reply to @braveheart29 about my interest to read it all as I need sometime to get into the whole context of the writing . Sure would like to contribute by next year.
Why not? I am quite lost here you wrote: Could we? Are you speaking on behalf of @braveheart69 ? I thought it was an open for all context with a writing prompt open for all like you did in your post in your Part 11 and I thought you were a guest of @braveheart69 not the main lead writer.
It is open, of course, but we (both @braveheart29 and myself) can decide whether or not to continue using your story or not. As can you. You can write a part 4, a part new part 11, or part 12.
I believe it is also in the interest of @braveheart29 to see your writing style, if we may call it that. Which is why I spoke in the name of both. Feel free to change it into "May I see some of your older work".
I will take it you didn't read the parts 1-10 ?
I would say neither is the guest of neither. We just "quietly agreed" to each write one part of the story, her focusing on Clarabelle's side, and myself focusing on John's part of the story.
Sure, I understand. I got interested (I have to say) on Clarabelle side at first, but will read the whole of it (all Parts). When I read your replied/communication with @braveheart69 I felt that I could contribute, was just that simple. Writing to me is more of a relax approach, and I like to concentrate on the true, as I believed writing is a means to communicate the true (I know this is such a complex issue) but honestly I have been quite busy this year with the release of our Guarani - GUA - The Philanthropic crypto and had not much time to write (rather than code) and my readings has been very much into the technical... but I am indeed into reading. As a writer I signed myself with the pen name : Baron Feather Pen and I just self-published 2 publications, Leap Fragments (a 366 fragments - an idea borrowed from the 366 days of the Leap year) 2 poetry books and at moment I have 2 working in progress writing activities with no schedule to be completed really. The reason why I could never sign with a Publishing House. One is a Children publication where Okie Tokie, which I mention in one of our replies today, Okie Tokie is a character of the children writing activity and a translation book of enlightenment, spiritual Dharma Talks called: The Tathagata.
Jack Kerouac, Albert Camus, Thich Nhat Hanh, Shelley, Lewis Carrol, ee cummings are some of my favourite writers. Nice to meet you both. I like your work and find also interesting this kind of post reading. <3
I believed @svashta is a little bit negative when he mention that 'sometimes the bad guys win...' I would say yes but for a short period... Bad guys never wins even when we can take winning or loosing as aspects of our opposing realities, just like ying and yang. I think I will get into the writing board collaboration here to add the power of the deathless, the power of the infinite universe into your tale.
My stories usually don't have a happy ending :p
They're fiction, after all :p
And I have been messing with that all along!
A new, uncorrupt, Sherif in town? ;D Could work. But if it justice you want... Clarabelle has A LOT of explaining to do, and some prison time on her back :p
With my story I also gave Clarabelle the chance to get away with her crimes without doing jail time. Up to you to decide, though. If justice wins, Clarabelle doesn't. Nor does Bob.
The new uncorrupt Sherif Okie Tokie arrived in town ...#lol What do you reckon? Sure it is a fiction which flourishes from each others mind <3
My husband actually suggested this for the storyline!
Wait, if I understand this correctly, you wish to come onboard and write this story with us? :p
Or are you just shooting out ideas for us to consider? :p You lost me~ :p
Yeap...I did a reply to @braveheart29 about my interest to read it all as I need sometime to get into the whole context of the writing . Sure would like to contribute by next year.
Could we see any of your other work beforehand?
Why not? I am quite lost here you wrote: Could we? Are you speaking on behalf of @braveheart69 ? I thought it was an open for all context with a writing prompt open for all like you did in your post in your Part 11 and I thought you were a guest of @braveheart69 not the main lead writer.
It is open, of course, but we (both @braveheart29 and myself) can decide whether or not to continue using your story or not. As can you. You can write a part 4, a part new part 11, or part 12.
I believe it is also in the interest of @braveheart29 to see your writing style, if we may call it that. Which is why I spoke in the name of both. Feel free to change it into "May I see some of your older work".
I will take it you didn't read the parts 1-10 ?
I would say neither is the guest of neither. We just "quietly agreed" to each write one part of the story, her focusing on Clarabelle's side, and myself focusing on John's part of the story.
Sure, I understand. I got interested (I have to say) on Clarabelle side at first, but will read the whole of it (all Parts). When I read your replied/communication with @braveheart69 I felt that I could contribute, was just that simple. Writing to me is more of a relax approach, and I like to concentrate on the true, as I believed writing is a means to communicate the true (I know this is such a complex issue) but honestly I have been quite busy this year with the release of our Guarani - GUA - The Philanthropic crypto and had not much time to write (rather than code) and my readings has been very much into the technical... but I am indeed into reading. As a writer I signed myself with the pen name : Baron Feather Pen and I just self-published 2 publications, Leap Fragments (a 366 fragments - an idea borrowed from the 366 days of the Leap year) 2 poetry books and at moment I have 2 working in progress writing activities with no schedule to be completed really. The reason why I could never sign with a Publishing House. One is a Children publication where Okie Tokie, which I mention in one of our replies today, Okie Tokie is a character of the children writing activity and a translation book of enlightenment, spiritual Dharma Talks called: The Tathagata.
Jack Kerouac, Albert Camus, Thich Nhat Hanh, Shelley, Lewis Carrol, ee cummings are some of my favourite writers. Nice to meet you both. I like your work and find also interesting this kind of post reading. <3
@svashta do you remember here in our introduction to each other I introduced to you Baron Feather Pen, my writing projection ID? Have a look at this. It is a poetry contest that I decided to participate: https://steemit.com/poetry/@projections/steemitpoetrycontest-10-minnows-play