Hello?

in #writing8 years ago (edited)

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Hello!

Are you all alone?

Are you a dog, without a bone?

Or maybe, just missing home?


Do you where a smile, while you suffer, all the while?

Do you put on a front, then when alone, just grunt?

Do you want to cry, or can't wait to die?

Do you sacrifice all, the big, and the small?

To lift up another, when you see them fall?

But just lay in the gutter, when you need to call?

This means that you feel!

This means that you're real!

So now take the cards, because it's your turn to deal!

For the cards are your fate,

and it's never to late,

to take control, and deal your own straight.

For you're special you see,

and that's obvious to me,

because we're all drops of water, in the consciousness sea.

So now that you know,

that life, is just a show,

hold hands with each other, and go with the flow.

For we're all just a pixel,

in a higher, complex muriel,

So own your own space, and make it official.


You are loved

You are love


Peace.

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I can see how you rap! Awesome!

Thanks @whatamidoing , I do enjoy a rap, when the vibe is right. Spoken word is more my thing though. I think you might like this piece, with a story teller vibe, that I did recently, when the moment took me, at about 4am :)
Peace.

Yo, this is amazing. You do a lot of written creative pieces?

Thanks @kevinli , and knowing your background in writing, that's a hefty compliment. Thank you.
Yeh, I like to do that. I've been doing a lot of welcoming newbies lately and I'm very empathic, I felt a loneliness and desperation coming from many intro's that I've read lately. so I needed to address it and put it out there.

Beautiful initiative. I'll join you on the writing squad sometime in the future

Future, alternate, or past, how will I know?
I'm totally down for that, let's write a new show.
Peace.

Very nice work mate love it.

Thanks man, I appreciate it. I'm gonna come and give some of your amazing photos some more love in a couple of days too, right now though, my VP is on life support :P
Peace.

Thanks mate. I know it is hard to keep the VP above 80% when there is so much good stuff here to upvote.

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