Its Dark Outside - Part 1
Its dark outside, when I look through the doors.
But within my shed, my laptop screen pours,
light upon the keys, that say, "type more, type moooore'sssss."
So I press here, and there, and I can feel the static in my hair,
A vibrant air, does blow with care.
So can I stop? Should I dare?
For what lies within, the dreams!, that take flight?
Do they die, if I turn off the light?
And what of me? and my literary plight?
The Sun is due, in an hour or two,
Will it relieve me of my karmic due?
I just don't know, what should I do?
Well, that my friend is up to you!
Do you think you could make part two?
If you would like to write a part two, please do so, then come back and link your part two, in the comments below.
Peace.
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But within my shed, my laptop screen pours,
light upon the keys, that say, "type more, type moooore'sssss."
So I press here, and there, and I can feel the static in my hair,
A vibrant air, does blow with care.
So can I stop? Should I dare?
For what lies within, the dreams!, that take flight?
Do they die, if I turn off the light?
And what of me? and my literary plight?
The Sun is due, in an hour or two,
Will it relieve me of my karmic due?
I just don't know, what should I do?
Well, that my friend is up to you!
Do you think you could make part two?
Peace.
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Hahah, this is awesome, you're like a mysterious story teller. I used to write poems back in the days from silly to serious kind so I always appreciate a good performance
Haha, thanks @ beyonder , that's what I was going for :)
I've been checking out your tunes too, and I am so going to come back in a couple of days and give them some love :) Right now though, my VP is on life support lol.
Peace.
No worries and many thanks!
Love it bro, upvoted !
Thanks bro. I took your advice, regarding the text. If I hadn't of watched your vlog before the inspiration for this hit me, I probably wouldn't have even thought about including the lyrics :)
Peace.
Nice night poem! the lighting worked to the words.
watching vids with the kids.... they want to comment....'i have heard about the 2 headed night worm...one head on the front the other on the back and the mouth on the belly...in comes in the night and comes to the bed...so be careful if you stick your head.'
haha....no idea where that came from...just typing as they talked
Ah yes, the infamous double headed worm, the squirm me squirm you. The best defence against this, is to brush your teeth before going to bed, that fresh breath smell will keep you safe while you sleep :)
Peace.
Mate, you're having a grand old time, and if you weren't reading that, then WELL DONE, great stuff!
Thanks @jackmiller , yes it was my own piece :)
Peace.
Outstanding!
Thank you sir!
You're always cracking me up! This was awesome. Seems the all nighter definitely paid off!
Thanks @neeqi , Just one of those spontaneous moments :)
Peace.
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