It does seem different than your other works, but that could be good. The pace, and story line progressed at a pretty good pace. No real slow spots, hard to do with out a lot of action, but enough non-action to keep it moving at a respectable pace. Mysterious Davis, a hook that has no doubt most of us on line, and being dragged along for the ride just to understand what or who he is. Nice job, and yes you should flesh this one out.

I'm putting it out here, for people to look at and this is certainly NOT my comfort zone!

Sometimes we need to step out of that comfort zone to grow.