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RE: How I edit my own work - Plus a story to read too - 9
Magic, witches, and warlocks. Spells and counterspells. A very fun read, Magic stories are hard to write I would imagine, The magic has to feel real, and the source of magic remain constant. It is no fun as a reader if earth magic is made from the air, and vice a versa. I would imagine a magic Novel to be one of the hardest to write of all. I liked the edit part where you had Morgana wandering the clearing as she spoke, as if to an army. That was a good view. I could see her wandering about hands clasped looking skyward, with a look of determination on her face as if she was talking to or at another god or goddess. I do so love the pictures you paint in my head. thank you.
Ooh, that's a great analogy... like talking to an army...
Thank you for your comments. I do appreciate them :)
I once went to a children's writing competition. A little girl was asked which she preferred, television or books.
She said she preferred books because the pictures were better.
I try to emulate that in my writing.