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RE: How I edit my own work - Plus a story to read too - 6

in #writing7 years ago (edited)

I thought she was going to lose her hand, glad that she did not. happy that she is in a nice relationship, and now with seeing her mother, maybe she does not need to lose the hand, as it seems her vision is returning after the wedding.

edit:Sorry got wrapped in the story. Very subtle edits, not a lot added, not a lot taken away, but enough to make it flow more easily.

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Thank you... I've noticed you've now seen the next part of the story... sorry... :D

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