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RE: How I edit my own work - Plus a story to read too - 12
It would seem almost that Elizabeth is losing her sanity after being locked up for so long, I guess most of us would. I am curious as to what Elizabeth was carving? have you thought about giving us a clue or reworking it that: "Katherine watched Elizabeth carving a "Bishop" for a chess set.."why a bishop Elizabeth..." Elizabeth was known for having one of the most strategic minds of her time. Maybe we will get to see what she was carving in next bit. Thank you.
She carved these words in the windowsill:
‘Much suspected by me,
Nothing proved can be.’
I believe the windowsill was rescued and preserved when Woodstock Manor was demolished to make way for Blenheim Palace.
Oh now I understand, I thought she was "Carving something, I missed that the carving was in the window sill." Must read more closely. Sorry I missed that.
No, not at all. I haven't made it clear enough, I should make sure it is... Re-edit! :)