Editing is pretty amazing, I know it is longer, and I read both sides, and I am still amazed by adding just a few words here, and a few words there, a little bit of movement even just a head shake or nod, can make it so much more not only readable, but pleasurable. Thank you I see now that she is going to be stuck, and have to work through her "images", I am guessing that means people that look like her, or will look like her, or look like what she would have looked like. I think. I will see, because I will continue to read where you take the story.