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RE: Is this too gross to write about?

in #writing5 years ago

Not a thing needed to be changed. The booger was the cringe-worthy finale your whole story was leading up to. It still makes me shiver in revulsion! Like watching a horror movie or something of that nature where you keep thinking, 'It was gross, and soooo much fun!'.


Thank you so much for your critique! AND for sharing my link! I'm so glad you appreciated my story! I still swallow and imagine something thick in my throat whenever I think about it! I'm at work but I'll check out that video you sent me when I'm on break. The computer I'm on blocks all pics and videos.

It was a good story, and you deserve a round of applause for writing it! I wish I could have done more to get people to read it.

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