Word Poetry Challenge #16 : Patience (second entry)
This is my second entry for Word Poetry Challenge #16 : Patience
(Typed version is the official entry)
On sky-blue pond, a yellow boat
In which, a man, in denim coat
Has set his rods, some line, and bait
And comfy seat in which to wait
But his quarry, freely, swim below
Under boat and to and fro
For denim man has thoughts conflated
Patience and Idleness need separated
For the former can get you what you wish
While the latter might find you too drunk to fish!!
very good! I'd say you've got a winner here!
And the boat of confidence!!
Thanks for the vote of confidence!