Word Poetry Challenge #19 : Journey

in #wordchallenge7 years ago

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I'm on a journey on life's road
How long it will be, I'm not told

I'm headed for heaven's gate
And I'll reach the end by faith

The road is stony and rough
And the dust makes me cough

I sometimes stumble on my path
And fear creeps when it's dark

But on this trip, I am never alone
For I journey with kindred souls

We hold our hands as we walk
And encourage with cheerful talk

Soon we shall all reach the end
And be reunited with lost friends

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What a wonderful little poem. Is the title missing, or did you not give it a title?

I believe that even the shortest poem or a short post on Steemit should have a catchy title. It not only adds something to the poem, it can also be used as an enticement to attract readers.

I didn't give it a title. I felt 'journey' would be enough. I'll add one next time

I'm glad you like the poem.

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