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RE: The Streetlight (We-Write #11)
I liked the fluency of your narrative all nicely animated and all. Although I got kind of confused in some expressions. For example this one...
and tucked away his mom’s voice before she left.
Reminds me Beatles song, Elenor Rigby
wearing the face that he kept in the jar by the door
Cheers!
Hi. Thanks for your comments. "Tucked away" means to put it safely somewhere to retrieve later. He put it in the back of his mind. He knew he supposed to stay safe, but he ignored her and went outdoors in the dark anyway. Hope this helps.
Ah... Thank you! I knew what "tucked away" means, but I was only aware of its literal meaning. Cool!
Yes, it's used to describe putting something away in your mind you want to cherish and think about for later; then opposite- putting it so far back into your mind so you don't want to ever think about it again.
Thank you! Now, I will tuck it away. :)
Loved Eleanor Rigby. Shouldn't have seen that....now I got it in my head, and will play it all night, lol. Take care.