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RE: Same Blood - Poem #10 (Welcome to the Sombre Days)
I like the magnets metaphor, especially the way you continued it with the blood. Magnets can attract as well as repel each other. If magnets get far far away from each other their bond will never disappear, it will only be less. Sorry for this little interpretation of mine but I really liked this and had to put my two cents in 💚
Why should you be sorry? I do appreciate comments like this! In all honesty, I had another version written, and it was not as good. The only thing that remained the same where the title and the magnet metaphor. I truly appreciate your comment and I am glad that you interpreted the magnet metaphor - especially since it is the way I meant it!