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RE: Applause - Poem #4 (Welcome to the Sombre Days)
This is really good. I loved the tone and the pace. There's a lot of attention to detail - just the right amount of rhyme and vowel play. Very nice!
This is really good. I loved the tone and the pace. There's a lot of attention to detail - just the right amount of rhyme and vowel play. Very nice!
Thank you! I have to admit, I'm not someone who observes the vowel-play or meter that much, so I was unaware of this effect. I'm glad you liked the pace and everything :)
That just means it comes natural to you!
At times, maybe. At other times, I do use a lot of editing and revisiting. So, I suppose I do have an innate system that evaluates the poetry at this level, just at a subconscious level haha.