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RE: Applause - Poem #4 (Welcome to the Sombre Days)
Good luck with your collection. I think with this one, the short lines work fantastically well, giving the piece a close-up feeling.
Good luck with your collection. I think with this one, the short lines work fantastically well, giving the piece a close-up feeling.
Thank you. I remember when I submit this into the workshop it was quite similar, except the lines were longer, and too many words. The suggestion I had received was to remove the unnecessary words, and here lies the result of that! Proof that the workshop works ;) Thanks once again, I'm glad you enjoyed this :)