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Here are some tips to keep a story coherent.
Create a document for the main characters you note down every attribute you give them.
The same with for location(s).
And create a timeline. Some people use sticky notes and keep track of the main events. Like the suggestive "ticket" the police officer gave her and so forth. That way, you know what happened when.
Hope that helps.

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I really like this one! Wondered if the goods in her pocket were some pot she took from him earlier...then asking myself if his mom would later call the cop back and the dog at the end was a great touch. Perfect alarm system!