Haha I ended up with the same issue as @improv...did he ever go to the toilet? Could their trip wait a minute?
And why were they running? All these stories that you write could become much bigger....maybe you could do a few larger stories, then put them together in an anthology.
The anthology is a great idea. I've been tossing around the idea of doing that with some of my favorite weekend freewrites anyway. I just have to choose which ones to do :) Thanks for the support!
As I told Improv, I should have just had him empty his bladder on the guy he killed if only that thought had occurred to me!