@givonwyne is giving you good advice on two points. You are on a higher level and that is great. That is the kind of stuff that I like to read. @givonwayne is telling you to explain it to a 3rd grader and that is great advice. I am like you in that I am excited about highly technical things, but I can improve by making the technical more accessible. Really though, this is spectacular and people need to take notice because you deserve it.