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RE: Create, Snooze, And Pin Notes With P!N v1.1

in #utopian-io5 years ago (edited)

Hi, and thank you for your contribution. The P!n app looks like another decent and straightforward note-taking app. I have been searching for something similar, so I think my search is over.

As always, the post is well structured. The visuals are cool, and eye catchy. The content is unique and editorial with your experiences in it. However, the post had issues. I appreciate how you post to the category consistently, but you need to dedicate time to proofread your texts. There are unclear sentences, joined with critical omissions. I will provide a few examples.

How did perceive P!n?

That is one of the sub-headings in the post. Did you intend to write ‘How did you perceive P!n? or what'?

Should I guess what’s your mind?

'Should I guess what your mind is'? Or should I guess what is in your mind?

These are two examples from the post. There are many more. My recommendation is: Always create time to proofread your texts. Use a grammar checker before clicking on the publish button. Nevertheless, I appreciate the information provided, and I hope to receive more posts from you.

Thank you!

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Thank you for your review, @tykee! Keep up the good work!

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