Hi and thank you for the contribution. The shopping list seems like an app to try. However, I had issues with the post.

Aside from the pressing issues on the grammar aspect, the post had many minor proofreading issues. This shows on how you wrote the pronoun ‘I’ in lowercase.

Whenever I think about how our grandparents survived without technology, I have reasons to commend the developers who are working effortlessly to make life better.

Effortlessly? The texts above means; you are commending developers that are working with no effort. Is that intended?

Many users today are still leaving in the past when napkins

My question here is: Users of what? You could simply say ‘’ many people’’.

There are many more issues in the post. I suggest that you dedicate adequate time to proofread your future texts.

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