Hi @alexandre-maxim,

Thank you for your video tutorial contribution.

I see that your overall presentation has improved since the last time I evaluated your video tutorial.

Here are some areas that you can pay attention to improve on your video presentations:

• Since teaching plays a very important part in the tutorial, try to put yourself in the role of a lecturer and that you have a group of about 100 students in front of you. When you speak, you will need to be more deliberate as you pronounce each word. Often times, video presenters do not realize this and when they teach, they are 'chatting' with the audience. Chatting is not the same as 'teaching'.

• If you pay more attention in the 'teaching' skill, your audio presentation will come out stronger. Your words will be more distinct. Right now, some of your words run into each other meaning that your learners don't catch every words that you say and are left with guessing. Especially if English is your second language, speaking more slowly and deliberately will make your overall presentation more clear.

• In your video presentation, you can improve on the visual aspect. I see that you use on screen arrows and circling. The lines are not consistent and too thin. You need to practice in making better arrows pointing and also circling.

Let me know if you have questions on these feedback.

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