Hello mansya,

Espoem mentioned a few great points about how to improve your design and presentations. In addition to those I also have some suggestions.

First thing caught my eye is a dark/brownish logo on a dark background is not always a good choice. There are some cases like if the UI or application has a dark color scheme you are kind of have to do it but in this case a lighter background would help your logo to pop more.

Repetitive objects in the presentation seems redundant. I'm not telling this example is the right one but you can combine some of the design elements to keep it compact. Here I've made a very quick example to give a visual opinion;

I used a webcam picture in the background to make it easier to understand for the viewer what is this post/design is about. I've put the horizontally placed logotype in a bigger scale, with a one color smaller version on the bottom. This image could be used as post's thumbnail, alternative versions of the logotype and one color version like we want to see in every presentation.

And a thinner version of the color scheme. These parts almost covers what you've presented several times.

I can see that you've linked a mobile phone mockup, yet there is no mockup in your presentation. Plus I don't see any application of the logo as well. It would be better to give enough attention to your posts as you do for your designs.

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