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RE: Carnet V0.14 - Access links, Customize Dates, Fake Notes Are Now Hiden & More.

in #utopian-io7 years ago (edited)

Hello!

I will cite a few examples for you:

It's over 2months ago since I published a blog post about Carnet and its features.

This sentence should read: "It's been over two months since I published a blog post about Carnet and its features."

First, was an introductory post while the other was a detailed experience I had while using its features.

Let me rephrase that: "The first one was an introductory post, whereas the other one was a detailed overview of my experience with its features."

The fake notes are the default noted created by the developer.

This is more of a proofreading issue, which only goes to show how significant it is to always check your work before publishing. I think you meant to write: "The fake notes are the default notes created by the developer."

The developer included an option to print document right from the editing screen.

Again, this sentence should read: "The developer included an option to print documents right from the editing screen."

Please do not be discouraged. Your writing has improved a lot. Keep up the effort; it will pay off.

I hope you will find this comment useful.

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