RE: SKYBLOCK.SK Testserver weekend - Join and earn SBI [+25 SBI in prizes]
Hello, @immanuel94!
Thank you for your contribution. This is a cool game, and it's great to see all the development being made. Your review is very informative and well-illustrated with relevant images. Keep up the good work.
On the content side, I like all the information provided. You went into detail about the newly added features, and I think that the post contains all the necessary information. However, it lacks editorial content. I wanted to read more about your personal knowledge, views and experience of working on this project. Regardless, it was a solid overall effort, and I enjoyed reading your work.
That said, the post did have issues of style and proofreading, but not to the level where it hurt the reading experience. To sum up, this is a nice contribution from you, and I look forward to your next one.
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Hey, @lordneroo! =)
Thank you for reviewing my contribution post and the feedback.
I will add more about my personal views and experience on this project in the future. I proofread my post and also tried to make it good looking. But that said, I'm not native English speaking and I can't really detect all the grammar issues, I hope that I can improve over time.
Have a great weekend. :3
I will cite a few examples for you:
I think you meant to write: "Today, I want to announce some new changes to SKYBLOCK.SK..."
This sentence should read: "Previously, fire spread had been globally disabled by default.
This would be a better sentence: " If you're one of those who don't like random gifts"
This sentence should read: "This has now been changed, you can now copy and store your beloved Armor Stands away as long as you want without having to worry about them. "
I hope you will find this comment useful.
Have a great weekend!
Thank you for the examples! =)
This comment is very useful, I don't know how I missed the first example. Normally, I sleep over a post and proof read it the upcoming day but this post needed to go out because of the contest.
I will work on my English to provide better quality posts, the tenses are one of my weak points. I'm sure, this will take some time... 😅
Thank you for your review, @lordneroo! Keep up the good work!