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RE: Simple Android Apps – simple music player

in #utopian-io6 years ago

Hello, @dongentle2!

Thank you for your contribution. This is another interesting part of this informative series of yours, and the same can be said about this project. This is a really useful tool, and you managed to compose an interesting blog post that contains significant information about the application. Well done!

The post is comprehensive and well-illustrated with quality screenshots. I appreciate the fact that you took the time to share valuable information about the key features described in your review, and I enjoyed reading about your personal suggestions and views; this is the kind of editorial content we like to see in blog posts.

That said, the writing of this post was not good enough, I'm afraid. There were issues of style and proofreading, and I would be happy to cite a few examples in a follow-up comment, if you wish.

Regardless, you did a really good job in highlighting the reasons why you believe this to be a great application, and I enjoyed reading your review. I look forward to reading the next part of this series.

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Thank you @lordneroo for your review.... I'll appreciate examples of my mistake to enable me learn and improve.

Hello!

I will provide a few examples for you:

The links to all the mention post are available in the link section of this post.

This sentence should read: "The links to all the posts mentioned are available in the link section of this post."

However, in other to be accepted by a lot of people...

I think you meant to write: "However, in order to be accepted by a lot of people..."

Generally, songs always have a way of getting to our emotions. It can help us feel better in times of needs...

This would be a better sentence: "Generally, songs always have a way of getting to our emotions. They/Songs can help us feel better in times of need..."

I hope you will find this comment useful.

See you around!

That's a great review and effort from you @lordneroo!
How much time does it take to review a post on an average?
Great job anyways...can we go for open-source projects not hosted on github?

Thanks
M.Medro

Thank you for the kind words.

How much time does it take to review a post on an average?

The time needed to moderate a contribution submitted to the Blog Category is not fixed, and depends on many factors.

Can we go for open-source projects not hosted on github?

We only support active projects hosted on Github.

Have a great day!

Okay..
Thanks
Same to you.

Thank you for your review, @lordneroo! Keep up the good work!

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