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RE: Simple Android Apps – Simple File Manager

in #utopian-io6 years ago

Hello, @dongentle2!

Thank you for your contribution. This is a rather useful tool indeed, and you did a good job in highlighting the reasons why you believe this to be a great project. You managed to compose an informative and comprehensive blog post that includes valuable information about this file manager, and I appreciate the effort you put into your work.

I think that you did a really good job on the content side. The post is detailed and editorial, and I enjoyed reading about your personal knowledge and views. You also took the time to share useful information about the key features of the application that were described in your review, and I believe that users looking to get started with this tool will find your post very helpful.

That said, there were issues of style and proofreading, but not to the level where it hurt the reading experience. I would be happy to provide a few examples in a follow-up comment.

Regardless, this is a very nice contribution, and I enjoyed reading your work. I look forward to your next contribution.

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Thank you for your review... I'm open to corrections an would appreciate your corrections @lordneroo

I will provide a few examples for you:

Files are an essential part of our smartphones, it is a well-known fact that a greater percentage of Android Phones users have at least one or more files available on His/her device.

This sentence should read: "Files are an essential part of our smartphones; it is a well-known fact that a greater percentage of Android users have at least one or more files available on their devices."

This works the same way in singular number, in cases where there's no information at all regarding gender. For instance:

Searching for a file can also be a serious work in cases in which the user does not have a good file manager installed on His/her device.

This is a much better sentence: "Searching for a file can also be serious work in cases where the user does not have a good file manager installed on their device.

I hope you will find this comment useful.
Have a great day/night!

Thanks a lot for the tip

Thank you for your review, @lordneroo! Keep up the good work!

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