RE: (ISO) A golden opportunity to acquire enough Afit token. Learn how to purchase on steem engine and see its benefits.
Hello!
I will cite a few examples for you:
The initial Steem offering is arranged to allow steemians purchase Afit token with Steem.
This sentence should read: "The initial Steem offering is arranged to allow steemians to purchase Afit tokens with Steem."
I will like everyone to get the steps clearly which means I will make a detailed explanation.
Again, let me rephrase that: "I would like everyone to get the steps clearly, which means I will make a detailed explanation."
In other to participate in the ISO ( Initial steem offering), you need to log in to Steem engine.
This sentence should read: "In order to participate in the ISO ( Initial steem offering), you need to log in to Steem engine."
You will see that you Steem has been deposited.
I think you meant to write: "You will see that your Steem has been deposited."
I hope you will find this comment useful.
Thank you @lordneroo.