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RE: (ISO) A golden opportunity to acquire enough Afit token. Learn how to purchase on steem engine and see its benefits.
Thanks for the review. Pls cite the issues.
Thanks for the review. Pls cite the issues.
Hello!
I will cite a few examples for you:
This sentence should read: "The initial Steem offering is arranged to allow steemians to purchase Afit tokens with Steem."
Again, let me rephrase that: "I would like everyone to get the steps clearly, which means I will make a detailed explanation."
This sentence should read: "In order to participate in the ISO ( Initial steem offering), you need to log in to Steem engine."
I think you meant to write: "You will see that your Steem has been deposited."
I hope you will find this comment useful.
Thank you @lordneroo.