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RE: Flutter; build mobile app with ease [iOS/Android] part 1

in #utopian-io5 years ago

Hello, @camzy!

Thank you for this contribution. This is a useful tool for programmers, and it's good to see that you decided to start a series of blog posts about this project. However, I have a few issues with your post.

In terms of content, I strongly believe that you could have done a much better job. The post tells the readers almost nothing about the project you are reviewing. Furthermore, I appreciate the effort you put in providing us with useful information about programming and software development kits, but I wanted to see more editorial content in your review. We value your personal knowledge, views and experience of using this tool, and that's the kind of editorial content I look forward to seeing in your next contribution.

That said, there were serious issues of grammar and style, making your post hard to comprehend. As I've said before, you should avoid using never-ending sentences; short sentences are both easier to write and more effective. I would also advise you to consider using grammar checker software in order to enhance the readability of your texts. The paid version of Hemingway will serve you well in composing clear, mistake-free writing.

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Thanks for the review again @lordneroo
Seems like i'll have to work on breaking down my grammars and sentence, well this is first time trying utopian out, i hope i get better

And please is there a certain amount of words that must be utilized in a blog post?

Thank you for your review, @lordneroo! Keep up the good work!

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