Hello, @alokkumar121!

Thank you for your report. Actifit is a wonderful project with a bright future, and it's good to see so many people working to spread the word about this blockchain based application. I think that you've done an amazing job as an Actifit mentor; finding twenty-one new members is definitely not easy. I appreciate your commitment to the project.

On the content side, you did a good job. The post is extensive and detailed, and contains all the necessary information about the work you've been doing. The post also includes valuable information related to the project itself, and you also managed to add a personal touch to it. Keep up the good work.

However, even though you did a better job with your writing this time, I think that there's still work to be done in regard to that. The post did have serious issues of style and proofreading, and I will cite a few examples:

Actifit is an Innovative DApp built on Steem Blockchain that rewards your everyday activity through upvote and AFTI tokens.

This sentence should read: "Actifit is an innovative DApp built on the Steem Blockchain that rewards your everyday activity through upvotes and AFIT tokens."

Out of these 21 members, 9 are existing steem users who never used the actifit app and remaining 12 joined through my actifit referral link.

Let me rephrase that: "Out of these 21 members, 9 were existing Steem users who had never used the Actifit app, and the remaining 12 joined through my Actifit referral link."

To summarize, you did a really good job this time. I do believe there are areas where you can improve though, and hope you will find this comment useful.

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