Hi @yassinebad.

• This is your third contribution to the Swarmops open source project.
• In this part, you have really amazed me with the quality of your work, although the sentences were long and contain a lot of mixed vocabulary, you had managed to submit a close-to-perfection suggestions. So, thumbs up from me and keep up the good work.
• As always, I’ll link a document on discord to provide you with more techniques that would allow you to enhance your style when it comes to “what grammatical tense to use and when”, and how you need to favor the use of simpler tenses like the present when the use of more complicated tenses is not mandatory.
• Also, allow me to criticize a little bit your presentation. please, bear in mind that the presentation has its fair share of importance as the translation, so don’t rush it up. Because, it is going to reflect a bad image over your dedicated work, this piece of work in front of me does contains some grammatical errors, so I will suggest that you pay more attention to the conjugation of verbs and for that try to use a service like this one, for example we don’t say ‘facilites’ the verb is facilitate and the correct version would be ‘facilitates’.
• it is crystal clear for me that you have rushed a little bit the making of this article, because on one hand this phrase ‘The string "engage" have now a....’ has been repeated twice, and you have some typos in your contribution the thing that have reflected badly like this one ‘mentionned’ (contribution specifications->4th paragraph-> 1st line) and ‘traslation’ (contribution specifications->4th paragraph-> 5th line).
• And next time, try to include the proof of work image in the word count paragraph.
• And no need to thank me in every situation, I feel embarrassed 😅.
• Looking forward to see your next contribution.

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