Hi @ahmedess.

• This is your first contribution to Opencart and second since you have joined the French team.
• I’m going to start with the presentation of your work, it contains fewer details about the work you have done, It is true that we focus more of our time and effort on providing the best possible translations, but we seems to forget that we are also targeting an audience, an audience that can vary from translators looking for possible contexts to normal people exploring the potential of those open source projects that we currently working on. So my advice for you is to write down any possible confusion or something that took you a lot of time to figure out, this way when you are finished you’ll have a lot to talk about and you can show the whole community(not just me), how much efforts you had dedicated in your translation.
• There was some misplacement of words in your article, for example we don’t say ‘Almost words faced had a relationship with’ either you can say ‘almost all the words faced’ or if it comes to me I’ll write ‘most of the words that I had faced’. Same thing with this sentence ‘The most thing I had to handle’ it is better to say ‘the hardest part for me to handle was...’.
• I also have noticed that you had included the time frame in your presentation, while it is already mentioned on the proof of work image. Plus, it is a little bit weird to write ‘from September the 19th to September the 19th’ 🧐🧐.
• In the proof of authorship you had included this link, ‘https://crowdin.com/profile’ which is confusing because it doesn’t point to your exact profile, when someone will click on it he/she would be redirected to his/her profile, so try to pay more attention to those details as they trim a little bit your sense of professionalism.
• Now with the fun part, I had the impression that I was dealing with the work of a professional translator and not the one of an individual, so I congrats you on this, let me just suggest some minor ameliorations to improve your work further, and you will find those notes on Discord as usual.
• Looking forward to see your next contribution.

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