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RE: How to use Instagram efficiently

in #utopian-io5 years ago

What a surprise. For a long time, Instagram has been acknowledged but not favoured because it is more difficult to track the traffic and engagement. Anyway, I like that you brought this means to the light.

Although the post is filled with general information for readers to understand what Instagram is and essential tips to start with a successful account, I couldn't enjoy the post entirely.

As I said above, I believe that reminding our community of different means of advertising and marketing is crucial. Though, I cannot leave out some criticism about the text.

I am not a fan of the way you started. The brief data summary is a nice touch. Though, I would suggest that you start with a short paragraph with a regular text accompanied by the bullet-point list. Furthermore, it looks like you sometimes forget a character here and there. We'll see more of it below.

I would suggest writing and instead of &. I didn't find the current use appropriate and would recommend you avoid using it in such situations. Throughout the text, I encountered many times that you miss writing a dot at the end of a sentence. Sure, sometimes it is not needed. But it appears to me that you could not decide whether to put it there or not. Similarly with an ellipsis. As far as I can recall, an ellipsis should consist of three dots or be written as a special character.

I would suggest that you keep the same style for additional notes. Let's take your Attention note and Please note. Their role is similar, and thus there is no need to make them different.

There may be other issues that break your writing inconsistency. Anyway, don't take this comment as a sole criticism of the writing.

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Thank you for your valuable, constructive comments @espoem!

Thank you for your review, @espoem! Keep up the good work!

Hi, thanks for sharing this article! although, I have read the same discusions on Instamber and Wepicker

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