This post was a bit of a mixed bag. The service you're promoting is an important one, and the targeting seemed on point. You also reached your goals. These are all important positives.

However, there were grammar issues with both the post and - critically - the ad copy. Such a short text should be pristine, free of any errors. You wrote "A transparent platform that helps you make Freedom of Information (FOI) request." It should either be "A Freedom of Information (FOI) request" or "Freedom of Information (FOI) requests."

I also wonder about calling it a Freedom of Information (FOI) request. In the post, and my googling bears this out, you say the Ugandan law is called the Access to Information Act (ATIA). FOIA is an American law. Why use the US terminology, and not the local term?

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