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RE: Search for Dark Matter - Diphoton/Ditau Channels Analysis Implementation

in #utopian-io6 years ago

This was a very impressive post, detailing some very impressive work. As a fan of physics, I was absolutely fascinated. It's pretty awesome to see this cross discipline work being facilitated by open source software. I also found your analysis of the issues preventing more of this work from being done to be cogent and convincing.

The post had some minor issues of grammar and proofreading, which detracted a bit. I could supply examples in a follow-up comment if you're interested.

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Hi @didic, thank you very much for your nice review.
Absolutely, I would be pleased if you could point me at the grammatical issues in my post.
Cheers.

As usual, these are examples. This is a super long text, so I'm not going to be able to provide any kind of comprehensive list.

opensource

Is two words.

Taus are negatively charged leptons and as such belong to the same family as electrons and muons. Taus are heavy particles and as a result decay very quickly into other lower mass particles.

Both of these sentences should have commas before "and."

To put things into perspective light can only travel around 85 nanometers in such a small amount of time.

Comma after "perspective."

The paper goes along

The paper goes on.

Thank you for your review, @didic!

So far this week you've reviewed 9 contributions. Keep up the good work!

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