Thank you for your contribution to the @sndbox challenge, in association with Utopian.

This contribution was unique and delightful. This is definitely more than an idea triggered by the challenge, as it seems like you have actual real plans for your own SMT, which are exciting and ambitious.

I do have a couple of issues in terms of style and grammar, however. Lemme cite a couple of examples:

• "Busy with the preparations, announcements and blockchain adventures for our community we're ready to share more!" This sentence needed a comma before "we're." Also, as a fan of the Oxford comma, I would have preferred one before "blockchain" as well.

• "So given that we are working together to bring this concept back to life in 2018/2019, we are getting really excited so read more below about how this all fits in with #sndbox and #utopian-io and see how you can get involved!" I've been preaching the gospel of shorter, clearer sentences in moderation comments for a while now, and this is an excellent example. This didn't need to be one sentence. It would have benefited greatly from being broken up. How about:
  "We are working together to bring this concept back to life in 2018/2019, and we are getting really excited. Read more below about how this all fits in with #sndbox and #utopian-io, and see how you can get involved!"

Comments aside, I am most definitely looking forward to seeing this idea come to fruition, and await further updates.

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