Hey,

This is a very good post, and one that will be extremely helpful to new and existing Actifit users.

I do want to talk about an issue with your writing, which may have to do with your native language. Many of your sentences are overly complex, and could be easier to read if they were simpler. I'll give some examples, as usual.

• "For users who are yet to know about this project, Actifit is an app built on the steemit blockchain." There two ways to deal with this sentence. The first would be to entirely delete the first half. It is unnecessary. Or, if you do want to keep a version of it, "For those unfamiliar with this project" works better. On a side note, I'll mention that Actifit is built on the Steem blockchain, not Steemit. You know this, I'm sure.

• "The main objective behind the writing of this post is to explain the actifit website to both new and existing users" is, likewise, overly complex. "This post's main objective" would be clearer.

• "For a better understanding of the subject matter, the actifit website has been broken down into subdivisions and will be explained in such a manner. " is needlessly passive, and needlessly complex. How about "To better explain this, I've broken the Actifit website into subdivisions, and will explore each separately."

Thank you for another excellent contribution.

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